Greetings Fried Folks!
I have completed the re-writes for Chapters 1 to 5. I am super happy with the changes Brendan has advised and the story is better than before.
Damn! I'm already super proud of Vaugn. But after the first round of Brenda edits, I am so much more confident in the quality of the book.
I'd like to take this opportunity to give Brendan a shout-out for his work. He has jumped on board and is providing some awesome, constructive feedback and criticism. He understands the story and seems to understand how to explain everything to me in a way that I can comprehend and take on.
Additionally I would like to shout-out Shawna Gore for setting Brendan and I up.
Thank you both and thank everyone else for your support.