Updated Paperchaser Issue 1 Script

Hi there Fried Brains.

I thought that, since the production of the artwork for Paperchaser Issue one is currently on a hiatus I have decided to review the scripts and re-write them, making them (hopefully) better.

Well, here's the revised first issue and I'm gonna be putting the following issues up on the web as soon as I think they're ready for your perusal and analysis.

PAGE ONE (two panels)

 

CAP:

London, August 19th 2037

 

Panel 1. It is the Isle of Dogs skyline on a stereotypical English summers day. The sun is shining brightly and there are a few beautifully formed white clouds in the sky. The buildings are reflecting the sky, producing very little distortion.

 

There are three balloons floating up into the sky from the street below.

 

There is a hollow box drawn around where Cabot Place is; a single line connects the hollow box with Panel 2.

 

JUDE (O.P):

For peace.

 

Panel 2. It is an extreme close-up of a young black man’s head being blown open by a bullet. There is no time for sound.

 


PAGE TWO (five panels)

 

Panel 1. There is a man (Jude – 32 years old) lying on his belly on the rooftop of one of the tall buildings in Cabot Place. He is positioned behind a sniper rifle. There are a few balloons floating up from the street below. A pistol lies on the ground next to Jude.

 

Panel 2. The panel is almost identical to Panel 1 except it is a little bit more magnified. Jude is still lying on his belly, still in the same position. The only suggestion of time elapsing is that a few more balloon have floated up from the street below. There are screams coming from the street.

 

Panel 3. Close shot of the back of Jude’s head, the street below can only just be seen because more balloons are floating up. There is clearly some kind of event or parade on motion… or there was… through the balloons can be seen the roof of an ambulance.

 

Panel 4. A close-up shot of Jude’s face. His right eye is still positioned behind the sight of the sniper rifle but both of his eyes are open. A tear is falling from his left eye.

 

Panel 5. Reverse view of Panel 1. Jude and the rooftop can barely be seen through the massive amount of balloons.

 

JUDE:

What have I done?

 


PAGE THREE (five panels)

 

Panel 1. Jude sits up on his knees. In the background can be seen the roof access door.

 

Panel 2. Jude picks up the pistol and cradles it between his hands.

 

JUDE:
Oh God, what have I done?

 

Panel 3. Jude places the gun barrel under his chin.

 

Panel 4. The roof access door suddenly bursts open to reveal three people dressed exactly like Jude. They are all armed. The man in the lead of the trio is called Michael – 30 years old; the man to his left is called Romulus – 18 years old, the woman to Michael’s right is called Alex – 27 years old.

 

MICHAEL:

JUDE! STOP!

 

Panel 5. Jude pulls the trigger and blows the top of his head off.

 

SFX:

BLAM!

 

MICHAEL:

NO!
PAGE FOUR (four panels)

 

CAP:

London, August 21st 2037

 

Panel 1. There are eleven people sitting around a large circular table, all of them dressed in black suits. Three of them are from the rooftop. From left to right they are; Ophelia; Alberto; Cloud; Lorna; Michael; Naomi; Romulus; Solomon; Alex; Peter; Viktoria.

 

NEOMI:

Jonah told us what to do if this happened. We don’t have time to wallow in sadness.

 

Panel 2. Michael stands up.

 

MICHAEL:

We have to stick to the plan. Viktoria, Alberto, we’ve got work to do here.

 

Panel 3. Naomi reaches up and holds Michael’s hand.

 

MICHAEL:

Everyone else, you know what to do.

 

Panel 4. The entire group stand up.

 

MICHAEL:

God be with you.
PAGE FIVE: (seven panels)

 

Panel 1. The group bow their heads.

 

GROUP:

And also with you.

 

Panel 2. Viktoria and Ophelia walk up to each other as others politely shake hands with their friends. Alex collapses back into her seat and starts sobbing. Michael and Naomi are watching the group as they say their farewells.

 

VIKTORIA:

I’m scared.

 

OPHELIA:

Me too.

 

Panel 3. They come together is a loving hug. Peter and Alberto spark up cigars together.

 

VIKTORIA:

Tell me this isn’t the last time we’re going to see each other, Sis.

 

Panel 4. There is a moment of silence between the two of them.

 

PETER:

I watched him grow up. I was always there for him…

 

ALBERTO:

Not your fault. Hate Jude. Focus on what’s got to be done.

 

Panel 5. Naomi is now kneeling down next to Alex; she’s got her arm around her and is resting her head on Alex’s shoulder.

 

NAOMI:

His calling was greater than we will ever know. So was your love for him.

 

ALEX:

…We had no time…

 

NAOMI:
Then let’s get the bastards who twisted Jude!

 

Panel 6. Ophelia breaks away from Viktoria and looks directly into her eyes.

 

OPHELIA:

Viktoria, I swear on my immortal soul that we will meet again.

 

(More…)

Panel 7. Solomon is now standing next to Michael and they are deep in conversation.


SOLOMON:

…The Straights and see my Dad. I’m sure he’ll know something and his connections will be an asset.

 

MICHAEL:

We’re going to need friends. If he can help then great.

 


PAGE SIX (seven panels)

 

CAP:

Four hours later at Gatwick Airport…

 

Panel 1. Peter and Lorna are sitting next to each other in a very busy departures lounge. Lorna is reading The Sun newspaper – the front-page show’s Jonah’s body lying in the street with Naomi kneeling next to him. The headline for the paper reads: “The Second Coming Gone…?”.

Peter is looking out of the lounge windows towards the runway looking very bored and anxious.

 

Panel 2. Peter looks the other direction, still looking bored.

 

Panel 3. Peter looks at his watch, still looking bored.

 

Panel 4. Finally there is an announcement.

 

ANNOUNCER:

Ladies and Gentlemen, Flight 833, America Airlines 11pm flight to New York is now boarding at Gate 13. Please make you way to the checking desk now. Thank you.

 

Panel 5. Peter jumps to his feet. Lorna politely folds up her paper.


Panel 6. Lorna gets up and Peter finishes brushing himself off.

 

LORNA:

Well good luck, Pete.

 

PETER:

You too.

 

Panel 7. Peter and Lorna hug.

 

PETER:

If our luck holds, we’ll meet again when this is done.

 

SFX:

KA-BLAM


PAGE SEVEN (six panels)

 

Panel 1. A bullet suddenly passes through Peter and Lorna’s heads in an explosion of blood and bone.

 

Panel 2. Peter and Lorna’s bodies collapse to the floor to reveal Styx standing next to them holding a smoking gun.

 

STYX:

Two down, nine to go.

 

Panel 3. All around Styx, the world seems to have stopped in it’s tracks as everyone is frozen in shock and staring at the murder that’s just taken place.

 

Panel 4. Styx turns his gun on the large windows and fires.

 

SFX:

BAM-BAM-BAM

 

Panel 5. Before anyone has a chance to react, Styx jumps through the glass and disappears into the darkness.

 

Panel 6. The shape of a small humanoid dragon flies off into the night.

 


PAGE EIGHT (five panels)

 

CAP:

Euro-Star. Due to arrive in Paris at 11:37pm…

 

Panel 1. The Euro-Star train is speeding through the French countryside towards Paris.

 

Panel 2. Naomi is standing in the tunnel connecting two carriages of the train as there are no seats and more people are standing all the way down the aisles.

 

Panel 3. There is a short, stubby woman standing at the opposite end of the carriage. She’s watching Naomi.

 

SFX:

Beep-beep Beep-beep

 

Panel 4. Naomi pulls out her phone and answers the call.

 

NAOMI:

Michael, I’ll be in Paris in fifteen minutes.

 

MICHAEL (O.P):

Do you still have your holy water?

 

Panel 5. Naomi looks confused. Meanwhile, the short, stubby woman starts moving towards her; pushing her way through the crowds.

 

NAOMI:

Holy water? Yeah, why?

 


PAGE NINE (five panels)

 

Panel 1. Naomi suddenly spots the short, stubby woman walking towards her.

 

MICHAEL (O.P):

Peter and Lorna were just killed. They Immortals are after us.

 

Panel 2. The short, stubby woman’s only four paces away now. She’s trying to push past a very fat Latino man.

 

MICHAEL (O.P):

That bastard Jude, royally fucked us! They’ll be after you!

 

NAOMI:

They’re already here.

 

Panel 3. Naomi reaches inside her coat pocket as the short, stubby woman finally gets past the fat Latino.

 

MICHAEL (O.P):

You and Alex have got to get to Russia. Do whatever it takes.

 

Panel 4. The short, stubby woman is right in front of Naomi and is in the middle of drawing her gun. Naomi has now pulled her hand out from inside her coat and thrown a glass bottle of holy water at the short, stubby woman.

 

MICHAEL (O.P):

Do you hear me, Naomi? Whatever it takes!

 

Panel 5. The bottle shatters as it impacts with the short, stubby woman’s face. The woman’s face melts and starts to cave in on itself.

 

SFX:

FFSSHHHH

 

SHORT STUBBY WOMAN:

ARRGHH!

 


PAGE TEN (seven panels)

 

Panel 1. The short, stubby woman starts thrashing about as the holy water eats it’s way through her skull. Everyone on the train is watching in shock and disgust. Naomi has dropped her phone on the floor.

 

SHORT STUBBY WOMAN:

ARRGHH!

 

MICHAEL (O.P):

NAOMI!

 

Panel 2. Alex exits the toilet and as she opens the door, she knocks the short, stubby woman over to the train doors.

 

SFX:

TTHHDDD

 

Panel 3. Naomi shoulder-barges the woman into the door, which accidentally opens, spilling the woman and Naomi out into the night.

 

ALEX:

NAOMI!

 

Panel 4. Naomi is hanging out of the trail but Alex has managed to grab hold of her trailing hand. The short, stubby woman falls from the train, totally unprotected.

 

ALEX:

Get back in here!

 

Panel 5. Alex manages to pull Naomi back inside to safety. The body of the short stubby woman collides with a tree and comes to a painful and deadly stop.

 

Panel 6. Naomi is lying in a heap on the floor while Alex secures the train door.

 

ALEX:

Got any other surprises in store?!

 

Panel 7. Alex turns round and sees two train officials standing right in front of her. Naomi is looking up into their angry faces. The other passengers of the train are all fighting to see what’s happening.

 

ALEX:

Oh come on!


PAGE ELEVEN (one panel)

 

CAP 1:

London, August 23rd 2037

 

Panel 1. It is the London skyline at noon (according to Big Ben). London is as busy as always. A thick grey cloud hangs over-head. Sirens sound all over the city. An obscene amount of aeroplanes are hanging in the skies above the city. Thick grey clouds block the sun out.

 

SFX:

HONK!

 

BEEP!

 

BANG!

 

SMASH!

 

CAP 2:

For the last 30 years, Mankind has been at peace. The first 10 years became known as “The Great Religious Surge” – unified, peaceful religious activity centred on a young man, Jonah. Over the last 20 years he became an ambassador for peace and prosperity. But Peace never lasts.


PAGE TWELVE (five panels)

 

Panel 1. A TV is showing a BBC News 24 report. It is showing a massive crowd running along either side of the street in Canary Wharf; the street is barricaded off.

 

Panel 2. A young black man (Jonah – 30 years old) with long brown hair and dressed in plain clothes is being led down the street. He has a group of six black-suited guards escorting him.

 

Panel 3. Jonah’s head is thrown back. Blood is spraying from the back of his head.

 

SFX:

BANG!

 

Panel 4. A female newsreader with flame-red hair, large hoop earrings and far too much eye shadow on is sitting behind her desk delivering a report. The news screen shows the body of the man, blood still pouring from his head wound.

 

NEWS REPORTER:

…Public opinion is split as to whether the stories surrounding Jonah are true or not...

 

Panel 5. A family (mother, father, young daughter) are sitting silently in front of the TV watching BBC News 24, it is showing the same footage of the dead man in the street -- it is in Canada Square (Canary Wharf). Their home is clearly ex-council and has no sense of personality. It looks just like a page from the "Ikea - Good Homes" catalogue. The mother is jovially plump with short wavy brown hair: she is wearing a beige blouse with denim jeans under a rather dirty apron. The father is heavily over-weight, bald, wearing thick-rimmed glasses, a dirty white vest and suit-trousers being held up by braces. The daughter has wavy blonde hair, a black t-shirt under a three-quarter length tweed skirt and black, baggy jeans; she is lying on the floor transfixed by the news report.

 

NEWS REPORTER:

…but his death has affected everyone in one way or another…

 


PAGE THIRTEEN (four panels)

 

Panel 1. People are rushing about Piccadilly Circus. There is panic everywhere. There is a single policeman being shoved to and fro. The roads are completely jammed, cars are trying to drive on the pavements but there are too many people. It is chaos. If people are not dragging suitcases and bags behind them, they are looting the shops. Dead cats and dogs lay everywhere, along with abandoned dead newborn babies.

 

CAP/NEWS REPORTER:

…widespread panic has gripped the nation in the four days since his murder…

 

Panel 2. A small group of people are parading through the streets preaching passages from The Bible.

 

CROWD:

...And the seas boiled and the sky fell...

 

A hairy religious nut dressed in Preacher’s clothes is screaming at people through a megaphone.

 

RELIGIOUS NUT:

The Wrath of God is nigh! The Armageddon is coming! Repent! Salvation lies with The Lord!

 

Panel 3. Extreme close-up on the RELIGIOUS NUT.

 

RELIGIOUS NUT:

The wicked shall be punished!

 

Panel 4. A bus is trying to get through the street; it is half on the road and half on the pavement. The bus honks its horn and revs it's engine. From one of the drain covers there is a strange goo oozing up from the sewers onto the street. Frogs and flies swarm around the goo.

 

SFX:

HONK!

 


PAGE FOURTEEN (four panels)

 

Panel 1. The bus driver (55 years old and weather-worn) screams at the pedestrians.

 

BUS DRIVER:

GET OUTTA THA FUCKIN' WAY!

 

Panel 2. The bus driver hits the horn. Chaos can be seen through the bus windshield.

 

SFX:

HONK!

 

Panel 3. One of the passengers runs up to the driver; she is in her 30's, looking angry, wearing her hair in a bun and a pin-stripe suit.

 

PASSENGER:

JUST DRIVE THROUGH THEM!

 

BUS DRIVER:

Why don'cha shut up!

 

Panel 4. The PASSENGER pulls out her wallet.

 

PASSENGER:

I'll give you a grand if you get us to Waterloo now!

 


PAGE FIFTEEN (one panel)

 

Panel 1. The bus continues moving.  Pedestrians get knocked out of the way and a woman carrying a baby in her arms gets knocked to the ground. People are screaming and yelling. The strange goo continues to rise to the street.

 

SFX:

HONK! HONK!

 

 
PAGE SIXTEEN/SEVENTEEN (two panels)

 

Panel 1. Thousands of people are queuing up to get into Heathrow Airport. The roads are totally blocked up. People are cutting through the perimeter fence. The Police and Army have set up blockades but they are over-run. Some people have been trampled to death and they are just being squashed into the ground under the crowds.

 

CAP/NEWS REPORTER:

… Hundreds of thousands of people are fleeing the country, citing that "religious terrorism will strike soon"…

 

Panel 2. A nearby church is totally packed out. People are desperately trying to get into the grounds, they're on every piece of ground surrounding the church, many of them are praying.

 

CAP/NEWS ANNOUNCER:

…Others have reportedly taken refuge in religious buildings and grounds…

 


PAGE EIGHTEEN (one panel)

 

Panel 1. It is a large church and completely full. There are people standing along the sides and at the back of the church, most of the people have luggage with them. The Reverend is standing in front of the congregation leading them in The Lord's Prayer.

 

ALL:

... And lead us not into temptation, and deliver us from evil. For thine is the Kingdom, the Power and the Glory, forever and ever, Amen.

 


PAGE NINETEEN (three panels)

 

Panel 1. Bob is about 30 years old with short black hair. He looks in good shape and wears a white shirt with black suit trousers. He is packing a bag at his table while the TV is showing the news of the dead man. People are milling around outside BOB'S front window. There is a half-empty bottle and a tumbler of whiskey next to Bob. A black gun lies on the table next to an ID tag. The room is bare and there are packing boxes everywhere.

 

CAP/NEWS REPORTER:

… While others still are simply trying to go about their business as normal…

 

CAP/PEDESTRIAN:

Everyone gone crazy! It'll all blow over!

 

CAP/ANOTHER PEDESTRIAN:

I ain't religious. Don't bovva me none.

 

Panel 2. BOB spits out a mouthful of blood. The whiskey tumbler is stained with blood.

 

CAP/NEWS REPORTER:

Elsewhere, the Cold War seems to have begun again on a truly global scale. Trust is at an all-time low and most countries have closed their borders indefinitely. There is even rumour-

 

Panel 3. The TV is switched off. BOB'S reflection can been seen in the screen.

 

SFX:

CRACK!

 


PAGE TWENTY (six panels)

 

Panel 1. Bob walks into the kitchen where his wife, Emily is jamming as much food as possible into a “coolbag”.

 

BOB:

I failed in my duty.

 

EMILY:

It’s not your fault! They know who did it!

 

Panel 2. Bob walks up behind Emily and wraps his arms around her.

 

BOB:

I was warned that someone would try to kill Jonah… I didn’t get time to chase it up.

 

Panel 3. Emily continues packing the food. Bob rests his head on Emily’s shoulder.

 

BOB:

LaBouffe’s been strangely silent these last few weeks. She went underground and I’ve lost her trail.

 

Panel 4. Emily turns round in Bob’s arms.

 

EMILY:

You’ll find her again.

 

Panel 5. They kiss.


Panel 6. Emily looks Bob in the eyes.

 

EMILY:

Call Vaugn. I’m sure he’d be willing to help you out.

 


TWENTY-ONE (two panels)

 

Panel 1. Bob jumps up onto the kitchen counter.

 

BOB:

You know what happened the last time Vaugn got involved with the LaBouffe’s?

 

Panel 2. Emily smiles and continues packing.

 

BOB:

He blew up the warehouse district of The Straights! BOOM!

 

 


PAGE TWENTY-TWO (seven panels)

 

Panel 1. Naomi and Alex are walking along a quiet, country side-street heading towards a small French town. Naomi is dialling a number on her phone.

 

ALEX:
I still can’t believe we got thrown off the Euro-Star. I didn’t even do anything!

 

NAOMI:

You punched the ticket officer in the balls.

 

Panel 2. Naomi lifts her phone to her ear.

 

NAOMI:

This is really going to hurt us, time wise.

 

ALEX:

You’re the one who melted the Immortal’s face in public!

 

Panel 3. Naomi spins round to face Alex.

 

NAOMI:

I’m not blaming yo- Michael.

 

Panel 4. Michael is sitting in Hyde Park with Alberto and Viktoria.

 

MICHAEL:
Naomi? You can’t be there already. What’s wrong?

 

NAOMI (O.P):

You were right about the Immortals. One came after Alex and me.

 

Panel 5. Michael gets up off the bench and starts pacing.

 

MICHAEL:

Are you ok?

 

NAOMI (O.P):

We’re fine, but we got thrown off the train in the middle of no-where. How’s it going your end?

 

Panel 6. Michael looks over at Alberto and Viktoria who look very tired.

 

MICHAEL:

We’re all very tired. But we’re supposed to be meeting a contact from the Government in five minutes. They’ve revoked our political privileges after Jonan’s…

 

Panel 7. There is a sudden flash in the sky that illuminates everything as brightly as the sun.

 

MICHAEL:

…death…
PAGE TWENTY-THREE(five panels)

 

Panel 1. BOB is walking with LUCIFER through the ruins of London. Rags tie them together.

 

Panel 1 fades into the right side of Panel 3.

 

Panel 2. A fat, balding man (ANDRÉ) is dead in his chair at a desk. A pair of scissors are embedded in his chest; they're holding a badly written note to his chest, it reads; "He did it".

 

Panel 3. Refugees are fleeing through the countryside towards Siberia. There is no sign of civilisation and behind the train of refugees are a couple of dead bodies.

 

Panel 3 fades into the right side of Panel 4.

 

Panel 4. LOKI is standing on an old stone bridge looking down on BOB and LUCIFER as they pass under.

 

Panel 4 fades into the left side of Panel 5.

 

Panel 5. Riots in Berlin. Flaming bottles, bricks, chairs etc… are being thrown. People are dying; police are dying. Chaos is everywhere.

 


PAGE TWENTY-FOUR (six panels)

 

Panel 1. The dead rising from the grave.

 

Panel 2. An old woman is screaming and slamming herself into the side of Notre Dame cathedral, a crowd is watching. BOB and LUCIFER are among the crowd.

 

Panel 3. French troops are standing in front of their General. Banners showing the flag and General. Tanks, helicopters and infantry vehicles are prepared for war.

 

Panel 4. BOB and LOKI are fighting.

 

Panel 5. LOKI returns to Heaven where millions and millions of souls are waiting to be judged and allowed in.

 

Panel 6. A newspaper has the front cover emblazoned with "France invades Germany".

 


PAGE TWENTY-FIVE (five panels)

 

Panel 1. Millions of Demons attack the Kingdom of Heaven. Angels are fighting them trying to stop the flood of evil. LOKI is in the middle of battle; his flaming sword is delivering carnage to the Demons surrounding him.

 

Panel 1 fades into the right side of Panel 2.

 

Panel 2. Heaven is burning, in ruins. Angels and Demons lay dead everywhere. LOKI and LUCIFER are standing in front of each other, a circle of Demons and Angels surround them.

 

Panel 3. The Four are looking out over New York. Famine is an ultra thin black 8 year-old boy, more like a skeleton badly covered by fake skin, it is wearing a dirty monk's cloak; Death looks like a true insomniac, blood-shot eyes, black bags under it's eyes and slightly over-weight; Pestilence is thin but well toned, it's skin acts more like a shell to house the insects and disease, they move the skin like a puppet; the anti-Christ is dressed in a casual suit with shoulder-length red hair pulled into a small pony-tail and with large jet black eyes.

 

Panel 4. BOB is curled up in a ball crying. He is totally alone.

 

Panel 5. Light and Darkness battle, it's like a liquid ying-yang.

 


PAGE TWENTY-SIX (four panels)

 

Panel 1. Someone's eyes are literally burning.

 

MAN:

AHHHHHH!

 

Panel 2. The panel is blood red.

 

Panel 3. Black.

 

Panel 4. An extreme close-up of Michael’s phone. It’s covered in dust and laying on it’s side.

 

NAOMI (O.P):

Mike? What was that?! Michael?! MICHAEL!!

 

 

March 10th 2008

Hey there guys,

I just thought I should leave you all a message concerning the progression of www.friedbrainproductions.co.uk -- it's still under construction and may take a while longer.

With this in mind, I will be continuing to use this web blog to keep you all updated on the comings and goings within the Terraverse.

I have decided to launch Altered State: Community Comic earlier that I previously planned, so please, if you have a story send over the synopsis (and if you've got any artwork, a sample of that too) we can get to work producing it.

Well, that's it for now my Fried friends,

Let's get creative!

A Brief Note After WonderCon '08

Hey there guys,

I just wanted to put up a quick note to say a big thanks to all you great people who picked up a copy of my comic at WonderCon over the weekend.

Please don't forget to drop me an e-mail to let me know what you thought of my stuff... after all, the only way I'll improve is by listening to what you guys think!

As you're probably aware, www.friedbrainproductions.co.uk is still only a holding page for the time being but I am working on tonnes of features including synopsis and character details for all major projects from comics to stand-alone graphic novels and also the many TV and movie scripts I've been working on for the last few years.

There's gonna be new character and concept artwork posted when the living legend, Nathan Kilburn, can send over his new work.

I'm gonna be posting a full description for the Altered State Community Comic as well, including any specific story rules and guidelines that need to be put into place.
As for the original Altered State Short story, I will be making this available on the website within the next month.

With regards to Chimera...

The artwork is continuing to come in and the first full issue should be available soon.

Finally, I want to, once again, say a big thank you all for your support at WonderCon this year. Don't forget to keep an eye out for The Fried Brain at Bristol International Comics Convention later this year.

Until the main website is fully up-and-running, I'll keep you posted on the developements via the little blog that could...

Speak to you all soon.

Bristol Comics Expo 2008

Hey there guys,

Just a little note to let you all know that Fried Brain Productions will be exhibiting at the Bristol International Comics Expo this year and, provided all goes to plan, you will be able to purchase the first issue of "Chimera" - the prelude story to "Paperchaser".

Well... that's it for this post...

I'll give you updates on WonderCon 2008 as and when possible.

Stay creative!

WonderCon 2008

Hey there people,

Just a little post today letting you know that things are coming along nicely with the preparations for the show.

As long as everything goes to the printers on time, you will be able to pick up a copy of Altered State, a work-in-progress demo of the first seven pages of Chimera and hopefuly the first full issue of Paperchaser!

I have also just heard that I will, once again, be attending the Bristol International Comics Convention in May 2008 where I intend to have the completed first issue of Chimera and hopefully a work-in-progess demo of the new Paperchaser.

I will try to keep you posted throughout the coming weeks and I will give you all a rundown of the events of WonderCon as soon as I can.

Until then...

May chaotic invention continue to spread!

George

Latest developements

Well I am proud to announce that Nathan Kilburn will be providing the artwork for the first issue of the Paperchaser prelude, Chimera.

Now, our deadline is WonderCon and work has already begun.

Also, I am pleased to announce that the first issue of Paperchaser is coming along very nicely and both projects should be ready for their unveiling at WonderCon - provided I've actually won a table at the venue.

The end of December/beginning of January will be a very stressful time.

Keep you updated as news comes in.

Comicspace.com

Hey there folks,

Well, again, I'm neglecting my duties of regular updates on this site but I can promise that it's not been because I've been taking a break from it all... it's because I've been busy getting the launch of Paperchaser and Altered State prepared.

Now, fingers crossed, I will be attending WonderCon in San Francisco at the end of February 2008 with completed copies of Issue 1 of Paperchaser and the first part of the Altered State mini-series.

Now I've been dealt quite a harsh blow by life recently as Nathan, my artist and God-sent talent-master artist will be unable to do the Issue artwork for the first of the Altered State mini-series comics due to schedule conflicts (which I can totally understand) so I am now putting the call out to all artists out there to contact me with your work so that we may create a totally new Altered State experience!

As an added bonus, I have now added a .JPEG version of the first Altered State mini-comic to the comicspace.com web site to help show all you fantastic artists out there the kind of work we will be making.

Our task is to create a completed, 28-page + cover designs (in and out) Altered State comic to professional level.

Our deadline is the WonderCon Expo in San Francisco on the 22nd of February 2008.

I believe that with the correct team working on this, we can do it.

Please, please, please contact me with your portfolios as soon as possible.

Many thanks guys.

Further Paperchaser developements

I have now started to write the grand finale story arc for the whole series and I think that you'll be quite surprised and entertained by the shit that hits the fan and the resulting mayhem.

I will try to keep you all better posted over the coming weeks as I have a great deal of work coming to fruition on Paperchaser, Chimera and Altered State.

Toodles.

George

A brief description of Paperchaser

Paperchaser is the story that takes place after the UK is totally destroyed in a biblical attack; we follow the rippling effects of this event as they threaten to tear the world apart and launch us into World War 3. We follow in the footsteps of Bob, the mysterious soul survivor of the attack who has now memory of who he is, or what his future holds. All that drives him is his determination to find out why he survived. why he can now see the supernatural world but is blind to common reality.. and why he is plagued with images of people and places he knows nothing of. Accompanying him on this journey is the one and only, Lucifer who has taken a vested interest in our hero, Bob.

Still chasing that paper!

Hi there people,

I know it's been a while since I last posted anything on this site but I can promise you that I have been working hard on all of the projects in developement at this moment in time.

First up is the story of Father Time: There is now a completed short story "introduction" to the Father Time saga. It sets the tone nicely for the main story and I think it's quite an interesting take on the story-telling. Imagine the Bruce Banner storylines (where he's being hunted to be used as a weapon) mixed with an element of Y: The Last Man and a smattering on Philip K Dick.

Next I can tell you that I've got the six-issue story-arch of my Plastic Man story written now and the first issue is completed; work is now progressing on the second issue and I'm about to introduce the muscle villian (the brain villian has already been introduced in isssue 1). It's a Plastic Man story totally unlike anything you would have read or would associate with "The Man" but I can certify thatit is faithful to the history and heritage of the character that we know and love.

The story of Altered State is not developing into a very political, very action orientated story with a hint of Ex Machina about it crossed with X-Men. Nathan recently showed me some concept art for The Nephilim (robotic soldiers in one of the stories) and I can confirm that they are looking great; he's now working to get the looking a little more evil and then I'll post them ASAP.

Chimera is not at a finished script stage and artwork is due to be developed on it in the very near future. I'll say nothing more about it now but rest assured, there's gonna be some truely great work on display soon.

Finally Paperchaser. Well I recently spoke with one of my artists, Ayo Koku and he's informed me that he should have a the entire first issue by late August!!

Good god, it's all go in the Terraverse and I don't see an end in sight!

Well I just wanted to share the latest news with you all and I will keep you updated.

Further developements of Altered State...

I've had a thought....


This is an interesting moment because my thoughts are generally considered "interesting"... not necessarily feasible or possible in the real world... but "interesting"

I'm not ready to share just yet but as far as I'm aware, my idea has not been tried before in the comics industry...

I'm gonna do some serious thinking and planning this coming week and then I should be able to divulge more information.

When I know more, so will you!

The Chase Begins...

Well I've had a bit of time off of physically working on Paperchaser and in this time I've done quite a lot for other projects (all of which are not the ends of any of them...)

But now I have started to return to Paperchaser and I'm bringing some friends, namely artist and other collaborators.

In just over 2 weeks time we're going to have some artwork for the first 6 pages of issue one.


That's all I'll say right now but as I've said... When there's mmore to share, you'll be the first!

The Bristol Internation Comics Expo

Well Altered State 1 is finished and printed and there are a few people in the world who already have a copy...

On the 12th and 13th of May this year I ventured across to the other side of the country to Bristol for the Internation Comics Convention to drip-feed Altered State to a mass of ravernous.... well... geeks. AND I'M ONE OF THEM!

I was giving copies of Altered State to every publisher on show and I even managed to get Brian K Vaughan (Y: The Last Man and general genius of writing) and Shelly Bond (editor at Vertigo Comics and a goddess for bringing Fables to the masses) to take a copy each.

The show itself was a real eye-opener for me and it was drilled iinto me by everyone there that the only way to take this "hobby" to the next level is to make sure your work gets out there.

This is why I've been writing solidly since I exited the building; developing new stories, enhancing older ones and shooting the shit with my Altered State artist Nathan.

As yet we're not sure exactly what our next project is going to be... well I know which one I want to do but it depends if Nathan is ready and willing to do it yet.

But I promise that as soon as there is more to tell, I will let you know.

George Terran signing off... for now

The Next Altered State...

Well, with Altered State I going into illustration by Nathan, I have spent the last few days working out the kinks in the next Altered State short story.

I can't tell you anything about it just yet but it's a good one. Quite different to Altered State I and it starts to reveal a bit more about the Altered State agency.

Once we've released Altered State I into the world, we've got quite a few projects we're going to be working on.

So for now know that there's no stopping The Terraverse and prepare for the coming invasion!!!!

What's next in The Terraverse?

Not a day goes by I don't ask myself that same question...

And I always answer, "Anything I can think of!!!!!!"
...


... And I've thought of a lot.

Now, let me lay out the chronological timeline for The Terraverse so far.

1) Chimera - 2022
2) Paperchaser - 2037 to 3038
3) Altered State - 2101+

Well I can tell you that there are two totally different stories that come before Chimera - and they have barely any connection to any of the other stories.
One of the stories, Beautiful/Warfare, is set Centuries ago and has NO relation to any of the other stories in The Terraverse to date or anything I've even conceived in my mind. This project is, so far, built as three trilogies which interweave to expand their world even further.
The other story Father Time (tentative title) has a very wide-reaching timeline stretching all the way back to Prehistoric Earth and the Dinosaurs; and so far into the future that Man will not even recognise himself (round about 3500) -- Not bad for one book!

Another project I'm working on, Colony Wars, is set 2467 to 2491 and takes a more action/political look at the future of space colonisation, bringing into it, Earth, Mars and the Moon.

Then there's the comedy series Cold Retail and the long-in-developement The Writers and Prehistoria.

Now, slotting these into The Terraverse timeline...

1) Father Time - Prehistoric Earth to Present Day to 3500+
2) Beautiful/Warfare - 1185 to 1333
3) The Writers - Present Day
4) Cold Retail - Present Day
5) Chimera - 2022
6) Paperchaser - 2037 to 2038
7) Altered State - 2101+
8) Colony Wars - 2467 to 2491

Needless to say, that's quite an impressive time period for any universe.

But when will you get to experience these stories?!

Well, ideally I'd love to introduce you all to Altered State first off - you know, start small and expand from there.
Next I want to take you into the future for a while and get you to try Chimera
From there I think I'll go in two different directions at once with Beautiful/Warfare and Paperchaser - These are the two biggest projects I've got in developement and they'll take the longest to get right and write, let alone illustrate!

But I promise right here and right now that YOU WILL READ THESE STORIES!!

Until that time, let's enjoy the ride.

Altered State I


PAGE ONE (5 panels)

Panel 1. A 65-year-old man (Douglas Jones) is pushing a trolley of mail through a busy office. He does not look pleased but is smiling an empty smile. He looks smart but “gone-to-seed” and he has large bags under his eyes. Everyone else in the office is impeccably dressed and far too busy with his or her own lives to notice how depressed Doug is.

NARRATOR:
Meet Douglas Jones. He is 65 years old and has spent the last 25 years stuck in the mailroom of a lucrative law firm in Re-London.

Panel 2. Doug is sitting at the kitchen table in a very small apartment. The apartment is tidy but not clean. The washing up is neatly stacked but not clean; the bin has some trash sticking out of the top. The last pieces of a pizza are lying on Doug’s plate in front of him. Doug is drinking a large glass of whiskey.

NARRATOR:
Doug has lived alone since the death of his wife 10 years ago… She worked at one of the largest hospitals in Re-London. He’s dangerous…

Panel 3. Doug is sitting up in his bed holding a picture of his wife. He is crying. There is a pot of pills on the bedside cabinet and some of its contents have spilled onto the top. The TV is casting light into the darkened room.

NARRATOR:
She contracted radiation poisoning. She died painfully. He blames the Government, they say it was an “industrial accident” but there’s no proof either way.

Panel 4. Doug is lying in bed looking at the alarm clock at the side of his bed. It reads: 02:34. Doug’s eyes are blood-shot from crying.

NARRATOR:
He can’t sleeping these days, even with all the drugs and booze.

Panel 5. Three men, dressed in black and all bearing the same “branding” – Altered State - are smothering Doug. One has a cloth over Doug’s mouth; the other two have guns aimed at him.

NARRATOR:
His life has just changed…